Trott,
A poster on The Discipline message board gave me the link to your posts. I responded to the comments there, but I wanted to discuss it here too, if you don’t mind.
You can see my comments on my board at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/The_Discipline_Group/message/33.
First of all, I’d like to know if I might borrow your quote comparing the book to a disturbed cross between Jonathon Livingston Seagull and Catcher in the Rye. That’s absolutely perfect and I wish I had thought of it.
I appreciate your comments – especially the observations that some of the more violent scenes are rushed. That seems like a very reasonable criticism and I’m going to address it.
With regard to the content: I think the things you find disturbing are necessary. Part of my objective is to show that we create absolutes as a society – things are either “evil” or “good”. We fail to see that there are contextual benefits and detriments to EVERYTHING.
Water sustains us but it can drown us.
Some bacteria are very helpful and some can kill us.
Automobiles can improve our lives, or they can destroy us.
The point of the book isn’t to shock people into hysteria. The point of the book is to make people realize that balance is imperative – that there are benefits and detriments to everything in the universe, depending on one’s contextual frame of reference.
As I said in my earlier response (on the book’s message board) – if the content disturbed you then I’ve done my job. If you read the book in one day, I’ve REALLY done my job.
I’m very open to your observations, however, and I’d like to hear more of your thoughts on the content – especially with regard to the violence and the drugs.
I can’t tell you how much I appreciate your comments. I wish you’d come over to the Discipline board and respond to this and the one I posted there.
Paco
p.s. – Gretchen, you can get a copy of my book from me by going to my website:
www.ahlgren.net